This is PART of my speech my real speech goes from 20 down to 0 but you can have a little read of the middle ( the start and end are funny but not the middle thats why i chose the middle). ;)
Number 10 diapers are better than sliced bread well it isn't first of all you can eat bread second you can make bread into animal shapes so it's much better than diapers number 9 trees are alive well no they aren't staring you down every second of your life number 8 Henry ford invented the car... Nope actually Karl Benz invented the car but just before Henry stole his idea remade it and sold it before Karl started building so that's why there are cars called the Ford Mustang and the Mercedes Benz number 7 Thomas Edison invented the lightbulb wrong again someone called Joseph swan did but Thomas stole the plan and made it before Joseph finished poor Joseph and Karl
Hey Justis,
ReplyDeleteCan you please you the What, So what & Now what to tell us what you have been learning about in your writing. For example, you can to see Miss Turner and we went over paragraphs: 1 point, explain your point and give an example of your point.
I look forward to reading your improved blog post.
Miss Turner